In today’s world being a famous person appeals to everyone, as it brings happiness to their lives, indeed, they live above the stars. In this essay, I will discuss why being a well-known person’s advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
The amazing lifestyle of a popular person is attractive for any regular individual. Instagram, which is the most common social media platform, shows us the incentive lives of many celebrities. For example, they post their gorgeous houses on their stories, as well as their uncountable kinds of expensive clothes. In the fact that the appearance of celebrities catches vast attention among ordinary people. As one of the biggest desires of being human is recognition by others is fulfilled, being a famous person has the greatest advantage. Another aspect of their style of living is working conditions. Due to the fact that singers can arrange their concert schedule as the way that they wish, where to and when to perform it. Consequently, the fascinating lifestyle brings the biggest advantage to celebrities.
Another perspective to approach the statement is money. Since one of the biggest entertainment industry, film industry, extremely sells tickets on many cinema, in this area, many producers can afford to pay a high amount of salary to their film stars. For instance, The Avengers movies, which are highly praised by their audience, probably spend too much money on their actors because of the fame of the celebrities in the film such as Scarlett Johansson, Robert Dovney and Chris Hemsworth. In the fact that the film itself can earn the required finance. When we consider most activities to have a happy and beautiful life that needs money, it is at the top of the list of benefits.
In conclusion, being a celebrity brings more benefits rather than problems. In consideration of their lifestyles, which seems amazing to others. Moreover, the money part plays a very important role in this statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19182389937 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87772276623 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6509563503 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211270695175 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063419593075 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088903855691 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140546483811 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493040936615 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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