The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?
In the current scenario, the world has been suffering from many disturbing issues; however an ever-increasing crime rate which is committed by youth needs to be controlled on priority, although it is argued that the best approach to resolve this issue is to educate youngster's parents on the breeding skills. I believe that in addition to this aspect, the bureaucrat also plays a crucial role to tackle this menace in proper way.
To begin with, today's young generation see and inculcate the way their parents live their lives. To be more precise, it plays a pivotal role in terms of how do they behave with their child? , how do they teach their child about morals and values of life? Moreover, parents could restrict company of their child to the friends to make them aware about certain anti-social activities and keep them away from it. Nevertheless, this is not only solution and may not reduce the rate of crimes which are committed by youngsters up to the mark.
Admittedly, the conscious efforts by both government and parent play role which is more indispensable. The enforcement of stern laws and strict legislation would not only punish culprits but also sansitize other young offenders. Furthermore, indeed this key measure would curb incidences of petty crimes, organized offenses, severe felonies and many more. For example, the introduction and execution of rule number 370 by the government of India in 2017, for the people particularly youth who committed fraud, robbery, smuggling, has decreased the number of crimes in the country.
In conclusion, while the burgeoning of crime rate by adult is burning issue in front of the globe, which needs to be tackled for better future generation. The development of upbringing skills of parents is necessary, undoubtedly this is not only and best way. I believe that the government plays an incredible role along with parent to reduce rate of crimes by youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08490566038 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77573417837 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562893081761 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7667233876 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265213829574 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880039517044 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739028781678 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158210581145 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596961625273 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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