Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
In the last decade it is observed that certain human activities have influenced the world's ecosystem which is why some flora and fauna have been extincted. In my discourse ahead, this essay will outline valid reasons of this phenomenon and also proposed plausible solutions to tackle it.
To begin with, change of habitat is the first and foremost cause of loss of bio-diversity. This means to say that owing to urbanization when humans artificially transform environment, vegetation and natural habitats of animals are destroyed. Take for an example, in 1990, Australian government cut copious trees to build of roads for tourism in Australian forest has lead to loss of habitat of white sparrows which extincted. Another noteworthy reason is overexploitation of resources. Some human activities such as harvesting and capturing of natural resources exhausts them For an instance, frequent fishing does not leave enough time for reproduction which leads to extinction of certain species of fishes.
However, despite the aforementioned causes, by taking certain stringent measures this issue can be tackled. Firstly, enforcement of stern rules and strict legislation would certainly control activities which deteriorate environment. In other words, law and orders restrict human activities in untouched habitat which allow plants and animals of that area to freely grow .Secondly, certain initiatives can aware people about detrimental impacts of their activities on ecosystem. Thus, people become more aware about their role and responsibility to protect environment.
In conclusion, although activities of human have affected environment which has negatively affected world's ecosystem, aforementioned corrective actions by government and public can improve
situation in the coming future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81509433962 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07151267346 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8548346425 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157047743491 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052259116131 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047345162141 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702889496197 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438492581737 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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