Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people consider that both the poor and the rich students find the admission into university not easy because of the selection criteria. However, in my opinion, I disagree with this view due to the fact that students with a rich background are most likely get into the university than the poor one.
In fact, rich students have enough money to support their education thus prepare for the entrance examination. For example, these students can go for additional classes of their choice and gain more knowledge that will help to get through the entrance examination and to secure the seat. While students who come from poor families can not afford for such classes. Perhaps, they must do some jobs for survival. They have less time for studying and preparation for the entrance examination. Therefore, the chances of the accessibility for both the poor and the rich are not similar.
Moreover, many private universities are ready to accept students who is willing to pay a huge tuition fee regardless the students have obtained satisfactory results in their prior education. This means that universities do not bother about the academic qualification. Consequently, rich students would not find any difficulties getting into the universities and this is not possible for the students having little or no money. Though rich students can avail this chance, there is an option for poor students. Many universities offer a scholarship programme for the poor, but brilliant student. If any pupil is not rich and talented, he is unlikely to get into a university.
In conclusion, it can be said that rich students can easily secure a university admission due to the support of their wealth to secure a seat whereas poor can not easily get into the universities unless they have enough money or intelligent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey have enough money or intelligent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24161073826 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8210122288 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5263175145 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.133333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253995515888 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106981340315 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838654728199 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179573833311 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811264013948 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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