In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
All people get old, some go to live with other old in orphanage, others stay with their families. Some people think that taking care of old people is the responsibility of the governments it must pay all the expanses and others believe that families should pay these expanses to take care of their old parents.
On one hand, some people agree with the idea that the government should pay the expenses of this care. First, Britain people believe that the taxes that they are paying for the governments monthly, is the guarantee for their lives when they get old. Second, for the English men he thinks that the government is responsible towards them and should take care of their lives when they get old. For example, the government should offer full medical treatments for old people and find for them shelters to sleep and eat like orphanage or home with older people where there are nurses. In my opinion, I agree with this point since we are paying taxes and fees for the government to secure our lives.
On the other hand, several Britain citizens disagree with this point since they think that the money should be spent for other important plans. First, many prefer from the government not to pay a big amount of money to take care of old people since they can benefit from it by developing their country and build healthy environment. Second, some think that each person must take care of their old parents at their own expense, where the old person need care and love from his family. For example, in my country people pay taxes for the government to improve the economy and develop the country, not to spend them on old people. From my side, I disagree with these points and I think that governments should assist and take care of old people.
As a conclusion, governments or families should pay for this care, that's why there is a conflict with this view, some people are with and against this point. Therefore, from my point of view I believe that the government should provide houses and treatments for old people on their own expense, so people will feel that when they get old there future is secured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...s or families should pay for this care, thats why there is a conflict with this view,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66133333333 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25771408484 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5450992632 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.571493381141 0.244688304435 234% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.257584634648 0.084324248473 305% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694589839817 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.418534675516 0.151304729494 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735105392584 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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