Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?
People especially youngsters are moving toward cities and towns, leaving their countryside searching for their future and jobs, to continue or begin their lives. Leaving countryside will cause several problems, but we can find solutions to stop this migration toward cities.
Young people are leaving the countryside searching for jobs, without knowing what problems they might cause. Social life will change and stop, young blood will disappear, and streets will turn as a ghost place, empty and sad. Some studies showed that this migration will impact on the economy, shops and small businesses will close, people can’t make enough money to satisfy their needs. However, increase in rate of ages, will be affecting on development and improvement of the countryside. For example, the Ministry of Economy in Lebanon, after deep studies showed that the number of young people moving to cities exceed the 40% and causing a serious issue in the balance of economic growth.
On the other hand, solutions must be provided by the governments and local people. First, the governments should work on building new roads’ infrastructure, to facilitate the transportation and connection between the cities and country sides. People should invest in their lands, move firms and companies toward the country, which will open the opportunity of new jobs and ideas for the area. Moreover, the assistant of local people and governments, to improve the sector of tourist, attract people to visit these places, where it revitalizes its tourist traffic and economy. For example, at my region, the council with the help of the local people, both worked to bring investments to our country side, which encouraged us to stay and work here, to improve and grow our place.
Finally, leaving the countryside is causing several problems, but several solutions can be found, and solve this issue for a better way of living. That’s why, people and governments must unit together and work to fix these obstacles, to encourage and inspire young people to stay and live in their regions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, as for, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25525525526 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6325873398 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.920902334 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313410979125 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104560503635 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927727903765 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20441292177 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829124661523 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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