In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home
with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.
Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the
family?
In the United Kingdom, many elderly people prefer to live at old age centers where their proper care can be taken, and they could enjoy their life with people of similar ages. In my opinion, the family members must pay for this care of the seniors as it is their obligation towards their elders, and it will reduce the burden on the government.
To embark upon, children have the prime responsibility to bear the cost of parents because parents have done so much for their children. From the birth of a child till the time he grows an adult, parents pay for all the expenses and satisfy all his demands. It is parents only who give better health and education to their sons and daughters and make them capable to earn money. For instance, my parents paid all my expenses and made me capable to earn income, now also they help me whenever I need something. Due to this, it is our moral and social duty to repay them and make payment of all their costs when they need our support.
Moreover, burdening the government with the cost of keeping older people sounds unreasonable as government budgets are already burdened with various problems of society. Authorities have to take care of issues such as education, health, infrastructure, public safety, and environment. Enormous fortune is required to bear the expenditure relating to all these matters. Therefore, a family should bear the cost of their elders to prevent a further burden on the authorities.
In conclusion, the government needs to handle several other problems of society, thus, I believe that it is beneficial that children should take of their parents at old age, which is their responsibility also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... old age, which is their responsibility also.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85314685315 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61504803189 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1528427319 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202643118345 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067645819473 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435600805636 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12005366954 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450735317653 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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