Internet is a powerful servant but a dangerous master. With the help of the internet, we can purchase anything including study materials and daily household things but there are some drawbacks of this situation. I tend to agree with the notion that there are some certain benefits, which outstripped the cons, of shopping through internet. In this essay, I will highlight my viewpoints and try to provide sound reasoning for my claims.
There are multifarious advantages of using internet when we use it in our groceries shopping. First and foremost, we can save money as well as time. To be precise, as we use modern technologies to buy our daily groceries, we do not have to invest extra time for this purpose. In addition, we can save our time instead of driving to the brick-and-mortar store. Secondly, nowadays people are struggling from work-life balance. Thus, they use internet to buy books, air tickets which allow them great flexibility in their daily life. Finally, individuals have many choices over the internet. In other words, people can compare the price range in different online websites and purchase accordingly. For instance, I prefer to by my air tickets from Make My Trip, which is a very popular air travel website, and it helps to to avoid the long queue in the airports. Therefore, internet is very important tool in order to buy anything and everything.
Conversely, there are some drawbacks also. Firstly, people are becoming more lazy nowadays. In other words, while people can buy there daily household thing with the help of their smartphones, there is no point to present everywhere physically. Hence, people prefer to buy their groceries from there houses and it increase their laziness. Additionally, people cannot verify the food items unless it arrives to their homes. To be precise, if an individual buy his groceries from the local market, he or she can verify the quality of the product with their bare hands. Furthermore, we cannot check the freshness of the online food products. I would like to cite an example. I bought vegetables from an online store last week and I had to return that because some bugs were found inside those greens. Thus, we can not eliminate the demerits of internet when it comes to buy our groceries from online.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate my viewpoints by saying that, although there are some drawbacks of online grocery products, nothing can pull down the benefits of internet. Hence, the cons are outweighed by the pros.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Suggestion: as well
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96674584323 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69793371242 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524940617577 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.36439054 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4230769231 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1923076923 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174770738814 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449467536535 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384451587383 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977024231979 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417264826091 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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