Recently, online shopping has become widely spread. people are becoming more interested in purchasing their things online. These including books, air tickets, and even groceries.In this essay, the pros and cons of buying online will be weighed.
First and foremost, to have a general look at the disadvantages that could be touchable for any online buyer. Fraud and scammers are around all life aspects, online is not far away from that. A typical example of that is a website pretending to sell items like books, tickets and other things and collecting the fees from the customer without any furth...
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E-shopping is more in trend…
E-shopping is more in trend with the advancements in technology and internet.people now prefer make online purchases for books, flight tickets and other household needs. In my opinion, this practice is more advantageous to the customers than the disadvantages it may bring.
Despite the basic downside below, shopping done through internet saves a great deal of time and money. In other words, there are a lot of applications available for smartphone smart phones such as Myntra, Amazon and Flipkart that allow people to have access to a range of brands for most of the items at just one place, and once ordered, these are available at doorstep within a few days. Therefore, people do not have to roam around the whole city to end up their search for the desired item, and both travel time and money can be saved. For instance, I live in a megalopolis where travel time varies from two to three hours to reach a place, and online shopping has made my life easier by eliminating the need to step outside my home. In addition to this, items bought online give users the flexibility of return and exchange of product without having to visit the outlet. Therefore, online shopping has made people's lives more convenient.
Nevertheless, there is a downside of making purchases online. Product shown online sometimes differ from the real product received. For example, sometimes product may have poor quality of material or may differ in color than the description given on the website. However, it can be ignored if purchases are made only through the authorized vendors which ensures quality control for their products.
In conclusion, online purchases have made people's lives easier by saving time and money to a great extent; therefore, I strongly believe that the advantages of shopping things online far outweigh its downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, look, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05080213904 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95096693297 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57486631016 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.825668908 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.933333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233580413474 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734591318491 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516812045387 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147185509844 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719756685136 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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