Despite prior generation, today, children tend to watch television, rather than do sport. Lack of playgrounds and sport facilities have influenced to their behaviour. These problems lead negative consequences, but we can encourage them to do outdoor activities.
Nowadays, residential neighborhood changes have led to young part of society to face with lack of playgrounds. There are a lot of high rise buildings, where teenagers could not find place to play group games such as football or basketball. This main reason have enhance children desire to stay at home and enjoy from watching television. Also, good television quality and content of channel attracted to itself. These reasons led to children become isolated from community and have problem with eyes and become overweight. Authority and home builders should build playgrounds for youths in order to make them to do outdoor activities and keep fit themselves.
The second reason is that due to dual-working lifestyle children have isolated from their parent's attention. They stayed at home, and have did what they want. Children become separated from community. Loneliness leads to children have problem with friendship. Friends can motivate and compete with each other. Also Parents should introduct their children to take part in sports and also, help them to make decision.
To sum up, despite having problem with lack of playgrounds or parents attention, children should to be attracted to do sport. In that case either government or communitoes must make them good condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
...ll or basketball. This main reason have enhance children desire to stay at home and enj...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...ttention. They stayed at home, and have did what they want. Children become separat...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...n motivate and compete with each other. Also Parents should introduct their children...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38842975207 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80200636499 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615702479339 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2573443312 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.7058823529 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2352941176 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148946432726 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505985460576 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309688803363 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956972803323 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276580316345 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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