In cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors. There is no longer sense of community. what do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest methods to solve it?
Nowadays, mankind become so isolated and got addicted to the technology. There is no perception to spend time with next door individuals, because of scarcity of time, shyness, afraid to make relationship. These can overcome with awareness and allocating time with negihbours.
People are moving to cities to enjoy all the facilities and comforts. They are not able to know there adjoing individuals because of shortage of time. People spend most of the hour in work and on weekends spend time at home for rest. In addition, many individuals after coming to home spend time on internet browsing facebook, social media, playing games on phones behalf interacting and participating in municipality work. Some of the persons have fear of relationship with next door circle of people because of shyness. To overcome these phenomena , government and every individual can take steps. Government can make the parks. In parks individuals can communicate each other, overcome the stress and have relaxation. Children can play together and make friends. Seniour age group people can exercise and speak to each other. Establishing community Hall in every area where people gather and spend time together.
To conclude, Government should encourage to build parks in every municipality. Every human should come forward and happily participate to spend time with neighbours. Such kind of activities increased the harmony and positive impact on community.
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- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Children in some parts of the world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. Some people think this as a positive change; however, others think of it as a neg 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...and participating in municipality work. Some of the persons have fear of relationship with ...
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Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of shyness. To overcome these phenomena , government and every individual can tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85973557445 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5437533828 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1764705882 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41176470588 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0487497866671 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0179529973628 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218965917108 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0325680798644 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123784901512 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.44 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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