In cities, space for housing should be created by knocking down historic buildings. What is your opinion?
In this days and age, urbanization will lead to the rise of concrete jungle, so this is why most historical building is demolished and replace by a several house for city dweller. However, I completely disagree with this opinion based on two reason
To begin with, no one can deny that each country has their own historical value, which is established in some unique buildings. Although I concede that these old building don’t play a vital role and should be replaced by housing for most city resident, the children at there can’t recognize how their ancestor live and exist in the ancient. That’s mean not only does this nation lose its national ability, more individuals would rather go overseas to have a career than both stay and work in their own country. Therefore, these kind of building should be protected too keep their values of residents, which can also encourage youngsters to contribute for their hometown. For example, many unique building in Ha Noi is still maintain today with no signal of destruction.
Second, these kind of building is a well-known contruction about art and culture. That mean this monument will give the character to this city, which can attract many tourist both in the local area and the whole world. As a result, a particular country not only climb their reputation but also gain a beneficial economic to them. For instance, we don’t imagine how Moscow maintain their reputation if they don’t have Kremlin, and so do with Roma when Collosium is the symbol of Italia.
To conclude, not only do these old building play a crucial role in save their historical value, but it also gain a huge impact for this nation on attracting the foreign visitor. Consequently, I believe that this municipal city should protect it for all cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
In this days and age, urbanization will lead to...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun house seems to be countable; consider using: 'several houses'.
Suggestion: several houses
...building is demolished and replace by a several house for city dweller. However, I completely...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...d work in their own country. Therefore, these kind of building should be protected too kee...
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Message: Did you mean 'to keep'?
Suggestion: to keep
...se kind of building should be protected too keep their values of residents, which can al...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...many unique building in Ha Noi is still maintain today with no signal of destruction. S...
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Suggestion:
... with no signal of destruction. Second, these kind of building is a well-known c...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
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...ith no signal of destruction. Second, these kind of building is a well-known contruction...
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Message: Did you mean 'gains'?
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...ave their historical value, but it also gain a huge impact for this nation on attrac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90066225166 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59853406397 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4492040587 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194927795659 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765813157309 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635004426694 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128647427837 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550008292658 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.