Computer based learning is the new era of education and people are getting diverted from Paper based education.However in underdeveloped countries paper based education is still in trend due to less resources. Computers have changed the way of thinking of an individual and it has become an important aspect of our lives.This change has both impact positive as well as negative, in further these essay we will discuss both the points.
If we talk about the positive first thing we realize that it is a paper less education which certainly saves our paper i.e. our trees. Computers save our trees and help us to have an eco friendly education. Second thing is that computers are vast in knowledge, if we need to search on a topic we can get a lot of study material within seconds. Computers are quick so there is no need to wait for hours to attend classes, travel around the world to get a good education and spend a lot of money on accommodation and other expenses.
We can have online education from anywhere in the world with the help of computers and as per our convenience. Global education industry is focusing only on online education, we can enroll into different courses from different universities at a time. Today it is not require us to leave our parents and friends to get a good education. With the help of artificial intelligence there is variety of knowledge children can get easily.
On the other hand computer based education does not support for any culture or atmosphere. While learning through teachers in school a lot of students learn basic knowledge of their culture and society, they choose and make friends, They can differentiate between good and bad, they remain bonded and depended with their parents,siblings and friends.
With the help of computers they can get knowledge but their brain development can get affected. Children may start to maintain social distance from their loved once.
Depending on computers totally will also affect on their physical health and eyes.
In a nutshell computers are a good resource for education but it should be used in a restricted way. Children should not be allowed to use social sites or gaming sites while using computers for education. Computers are meant to help human not to depend on. For personal brain development children should practice on paper bases mathematics calculation and logical reasoning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8049855169 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4089805415 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.894736842 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125755447052 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432812681869 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386847278054 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616207018445 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391662465725 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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