As computers are being used more and more in education there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom Do you agree or disagree

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

Do you agree or disagree ?

Computers are reducing or replacing manual activities but education might be an exception as the role of teachers cannot be replaced.

Teachers teach the class in a way that can be understood by all the students and if a topic is not clear, the doubt can be explained in a different way so that it is very clear for the student in an interactive mode. Younger children or pre-school kids are taught alphabets, colours and shapes with look and feel so that they are easily understood and they can remember them. For Instance, my younger daughter goes to pre-school where they teach alphabets with toys meaning if they have to teach letter ‘G’, they a toy similar to goat which really represent goat by look and feel. By which it can be easily understood by the tender ones.

On the contrary, if the subjects are recorded and students has to learn from it, it would burden them as they might have a lot of doubts and which can’t be answered then and there and hence the learners feel bored and lose interest in their studies. For example, a survey conducted by Hindu newspaper for 100 students of same age group who learned online and the one’s who were taught by teacher in a classroom, the latter had given better results in their exams.

In conclusion, Though the technology is bringing a lot of changes, it can’t replace a teacher but it can become a tool which would help the teacher in digitally explaining the students.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, really, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67058823529 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52387599125 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556862745098 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4804314528 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.875 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16261537555 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833053221612 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077793606609 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12120225213 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083922348147 0.056905535591 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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