It is generally considered that nowadays pursue growing in the globe community is the biggest hurdle faced by the individuals. This essay will illustrate some of its problems along some plausible solution.
To commence with, there are number of rural people coming in the urban areas. To explain it, more masses come in the city to find a better job. In the countryside jobs facility are less. They can earn good money. More or more humans coming in the city side. To cite an example, a survey was conducted by world population organization found in 2016 that in Canada some villages were empty because of their lack of jobs and came in the city areas. To tackle with, regime should that they open some companies in rural side, with this all employee can get job easily in their village and they earn can more money and save the money for future.
In addition to this, they find the better life style in city side. To explicate this notion that some people think about the village life that it is not good life in the village, it is better only in the urban areas. There are number of facilities in the city. Moreover, they know about the clothes, culture, living style in the city side. So, they want to move in the big cities. To epitome, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that many France village people influence by the internet and they come and live in the city side for their high level of living. To solve it, policy maker should that they increase in the taxes in all items so that all individuals understand the value of money and they do not waste money on their living style and they stay in village areas.
To conclude, although with lack of jobs and living style increased society in the city yet, these problems can be tackled with the help of government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60615384615 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25162663095 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498461538462 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4817508585 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70588235294 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0629559798989 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0215420174037 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241942084711 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491643921021 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278037200834 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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