icreasingly population growth in countries like janpan,india and china is life threaten sitution in the world.if we give this massive population a proper direction and opportunties this population become the manpower.but, on the side of coin depletion of natural resourses occures increasinly.which might be life threaten or alarming.without any specific planning and destination or not using alternatives life will have been extint.
although, in many countries like chaina,india and japan population is increasing with exponantional rate.if government made proper planning and polices for such great amount of public become manpower for country.like in chaina population is in billion, because of government correct polices china have been super power of world.chines bussiness is huge investment through out the world.another exemple from mention countries japan with a massive nation is also well off country of world.after complete distriction of japan in world war 2 this nation made their name and identity as a intigrated nation.due to government polices but on the other hand in india gigantic population is dying with hunger,poverty rate highier than other countries.this country have also population increase size but not well managed.population can be power for a country as well as you use it properly.
on the other hand many argued that population might cause population explosion.increase in public means increase amount of resourse been used.at the end depletion of resourse is life alarming condition for whole world.studies shows that increase amount of burning of coal and gasses ozen layer start depleting.percentage of oxygen is 18% less as compared to 1 million year ago because of cutting trees.decrease in cultivated land and increased industrilization are extint many species of plants and animal and many are endanger.although increase in population rate is growing with this speed would cause many life threaten condition in future.
world population is growing with exponantioal rate in future it would cause population explosion which is alarming sitution of whole world.population control measures should be taken otherwise it endanger the whole world.another thing is to use the manpower in proper way this become power.government should made good apportunities for excisting public and also take some steps to control population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, another thing, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68926553672 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49683741969 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 88.0 20.2975951904 434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.507629719 49.4020404114 390% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 503.5 106.682146367 472% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 88.5 20.7667163134 426% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.25 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216389757938 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144915840143 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371057665109 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144915840143 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371057665109 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.6 13.0946893788 379% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -34.76 50.2224549098 -69% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 11.3001002004 354% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.91 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.93 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.2 10.1190380762 368% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 50.0 10.7795591182 464% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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