some people that their should be fixed punishment for each type of crime.others, however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on punishment .discuss both the views and give your opinion.
The punishment for crimes are important for law and order condition of any country.Some people believe that each violation should have some specific sanction,but other think that situation of personal crime and stimulation for execution,should be taken into mind when sentencing on charge.In this essay we will discuss both the side of views and some opinion about this matter.
According to some people opine that every criminal should be given specific retribution regard less of any relaxation.Because each having some reasons for doing misdeed.Although penalty make them from performing transgression again.For example in China government rules that person who carry out corruption sentenced death and now because of discipline correction corruption almost wipe out.Another reason is that person who misconduct with right of other should also feel pain of situation.Because most of wrong people after getting bail obligate crimes again because of relaxation they have already achieved.According to report with abolish of major punishment leads to increase of violation in US.However the countries where law and order conditions are highly developed because of strict rules and regulation.
On the other hand,other school of thoughts which argue that circumstances and incitement for crime should be in mind before sentence any charge.Many people which only barb or robe because of poverty and jobless condition whose are not criminal in true sense.therefor some relaxation should be given them like some school and college children in some recent years shoot many students in school because of stress and mental problem.And if these type of people to major penance it would be unfair and make them terrorist.for example a judge in america charge all people at court fifty dollars to pay old make who steal bread because of hunger.
In this essay we discussed both views of the argument but from my point of view relaxation for crime with consideration of motivation and circumstances can be taken in small crimes.But this leads to development of organised gang and crime like murder and rape which encourage the criminal.I personally believe that high-profile cases should be punished according to law.
- some people opinion that its better way to accept the bad situation like unsatisfactory in jobs and lack of money, while other believe that better to try and improve the situation. Discuss both the views an d give your own opinion. 78
- Many people complain about commercial advertisements and their influence on children. Should it be controlled by the government? What are the possible effects on children? 61
- THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE CONSUMPTION OF FISH AND SOME DIFFERENT KIND OF MEAT IN A EUROPEAN COUNTRY BETWEEN 1979 and 2004.sumarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where revelant. 67
- the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.summarise the information by reporting main features and making comparison where relavent. 56
- Living in a country where you have to peak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44314868805 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07147803824 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577259475219 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.2975951904 419% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.814078699 49.4020404114 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 466.75 106.682146367 438% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.75 20.7667163134 413% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369717737924 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248868630055 0.084324248473 295% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757882806179 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248868630055 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757882806179 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.1 13.0946893788 360% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.26 50.2224549098 -46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 11.3001002004 333% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.46 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.54 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.1190380762 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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