the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.summarise the information by reporting main features and making comparison where relavent.
The table below depicts the data about spending on different consumer goods in five different countries during 2002.A glance at table reveals that Ireland and Turkey spending twenty-eight percent and thirty-two percent was approximately doubled as compare to three other countries in food/drinks/tobacco.Italy spending most of its income on clothing and footwear of nine percent while in leisure and education sector Turkey highest spending involved about four percent.
Although Turkey spended on food,drink/tobacco and leisure/education industries by consumers were 32.14% and 4.35% highest as compare to rest of four.While in clothing and footwear Turkey was second highest with comparison others about 6.63%.However, Sweden consumer spending on food utility and costume was least one 15.77% and 5.40% respectively.And on education was 3.22%.
The Spain spended least on leisure and education during this period 1.98% of turkey while spending on food and clothing was 18.80% and 6.51%.
In the short the table information gives that highest spending on food,and education by turkey and lowest by Spain and sweden.But in costume category highest percentage was Italy and least by Sweden.
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.TO WHAT EXTEND TO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE 70
- In many countries schools have sever problem with students behavior.does the main causes of problem and suggested solution. 84
- Some people think that history is one of most important schools subject. other think that in today world subject like science and technology more important than history. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion. 78
- in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing.what do you think are causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 78
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men andwomen of different employment status.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shownbelow.You should write at 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...in five different countries during 2002.A glance at table reveals that Ireland an...
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... other countries in food/drinks/tobacco.Italy spending most of its income on clothing...
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...ercent. Although Turkey spended on food,drink/tobacco and leisure/education industrie...
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....35% highest as compare to rest of four.While in clothing and footwear Turkey was sec...
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...hest with comparison others about 6.63%.However, Sweden consumer spending on food utili...
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...least one 15.77% and 5.40% respectively.And on education was 3.22%. The Spain spen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74011299435 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29245256056 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.763756398 43.030603864 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 254.0 112.824112599 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.25 22.9334400587 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182518629889 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109277264899 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631333144731 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109277264899 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631333144731 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.2329268293 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.9 11.4140731707 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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