As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes.
Why does this happen?
How does this affect society?
As states have grown up there has been a change in the increase of small families. This happens because of people traveling to cities to do their jobs and to enjoy a better life, as a result, there is a shortage of natural resources.
On the one hand, in the contemporary era citizens tend to move to well-developed counties from villages to do their duties. With this trend, grandparents are left alone in the countryside which dived big families into small families. In Addition, human beings attracted to a western lifestyle which decline by the grandparents, due to this disagreement elder people got married and they are separated into two families. For example, in India, elder men or women getting married at an early age and they are moving to metropolitan cities to enjoy their life.
On the other hand, fewer family members culture creating a shortage of house availability and over usage of natural resources in urban areas. The area available in cities for housing is less compared with a commercial building, as a result paying rent on flats increasing. Furthermore, in combined family, usage of electricity, gas, and water is less compare with multiple small families. For instance, a recent study conducted by The Times, a magazine in the U.K., proven that separating the families into smaller groups causing over usage of water and gas which is precious for humans life.
In conclusion, I reiterate that in well-developed nations the ratio of small families increasing. This happening due to elders moving to towns and counties to do their duties as a reflection it is impacting on excessive usage of natural resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87142574439 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0188288035 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133286103128 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513367689882 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040423645916 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922768450319 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361215121268 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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