Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A few citizens argue that tourists to other nations should follow local tradition, while others disagree and think that the host nation should accept cultural differences. Alothough I believe that visitors should follow the local behaviour and tradition, accepting overseas culture to local may impact on their culture existance in the society.
On the one hand, travellers should follow the local guidelines to make them safe and secure where local civiliens could treat them as local humanbeigns. In addition, by following the countryside behaviour sitevisiters can also feel exitement because it is new to them. For Example, in India, many tourists follow the indian tradition and culture without any difficulty. I agree with this notion where men and women gift their tradition to the future generation.
On the other hand, allowing overseas culture into local causes for negleting their own culture and it may not exists in future. Furthermore, by following new tradation and behaviour will impact on their financial stability as they need to invest more money on new things to buy and adopt. And it may damage their existing relationships. To illustrate, in Andaman islands, tribels killed one other nation citizen as they do not encourage to allow the outside people into their territory because they thought that other citizens may harm them. I disagree that acceptiong overseas culture may damage the existance of history.
In conclusion, some citizens say that travellers should follow the local tradition and instructions while others argue that host nation should allow the different cultures. I believe that sitevisiters should follow the local culture and behaviour where they can complete their trip safe and secure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...their own culture and it may not exists in future. Furthermore, by following new tradati...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: allowing
...nation citizen as they do not encourage to allow the outside people into their territory...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40073529412 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65989280539 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496323529412 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0438059513 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312963224158 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119898426057 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999285316983 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227292240624 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110584623942 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.