In the modern era, to be employed one needs to have skills. Education is considered an important tool to learn new skills. Irrespective of this, there has been a rise in the voice to make education mandatory only up to primary school. I am against this thought and believe that government should promote education through various schemes to bring the unemployment level low.
It is a well-known fact that education is a key to develop skills. In the 21st century where technology has taken over the manual jobs, skills are important to get the jobs. Only specialists are required to manage the machines. Education is prerequisite to learn to operate these high-tech machines. Since the advancement of technology, there has been a steady decline in manual labour. According to a report of labor ministry, with the advancement of data science and artificial intelligence, it is expected that unemployment will further rise. The only solution that has been recommended by experts is to get an education and learn to co-exist with these technologies.
Education not only helps an individual to get the job but also helps in prevailing the sanity in the society. It is often seen that uneducated people are behind heinous crimes. An educated person understands his moral duty and consequences of such crimes. Thus, refrains from committing them. An article published in the national daily brought into light a story of an African nation. Where community programs have been initiated to provide secondary school education to counter the crime. The report highlighted that results have started showing up and crime has decreased.
To conclude, secondary education is an important essential requirement in modern society to curb unemployment and to keep crime in check. More people can be encouraged to not quite after primary school if the government brings in some initiatives by way of paid internships or scholarships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nto light a story of an African nation. Where community programs have been initiated ...
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Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay of paid internships or scholarships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21290322581 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9497279368 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7674399385 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232792797096 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614385580177 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590197221707 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143817167733 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401335059922 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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