Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people.
Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
The vast majority of nations are suffering from the increasing crime rate all over the world and the young generation seems to be more vulnerable to such strength. This essay will discuss causes contributing to the juvenile delinquency and possible remedies including joint effort of parents and school.
Be possible fundamental aspect laying under this issue is a lack of parenting. That is to say that Apple has control over teenagers may cause them playing truant and make them miss classes which are crucial for their academic performance and future prospects. Moreover, such Behavior might lead them to a bath company. Another significant element causing this situation is a poor educational system at school which probably does not highlight possible negative consequences of misbehaving that would deter students. For example, the recent study conducted by the new Sultan State Academy review that the lack of parents involvement and non-qualified staff contribute to Crime among young members of society.
Possible remedies to this phenomenon would be the coordination between families and school personal if a parent was involved in to child's interests and hobbies, search conscientious engagement would positively perfect on child's performance. In addition to this, schoolteachers could arrange sessions with former criminals that will deliver speeches to attendees in order to Mentor them to become a law-abiding citizen spirit for instance, the juvenile delinquency rate was decreased in the region after one of the local schools facilitator training session with X detainees.
to conclude, while it seems true that the lack of parents inclusion and for oversized from educational institutions might pause youth becoming criminals. The Joint family involvement and the school mentoring would be an effective remedy.
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- appears to be rising in most countries in the world especially among young people Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose some solutions you think would be effective 84
- Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world especially among young people Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose some solutions you think would be effective 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56989247312 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90795225692 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641577060932 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2752524829 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.272727273 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192882149761 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749603304546 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551286447002 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117389772433 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325853688723 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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