The crime commitment in municipals is more that rustic regions. In my point of view, the cause of the crime growth in the civic district is overpopulation and the reason for the decline of crime level in the rural zone are the satisfaction of life. In this essay, we will discuss the reasons and the solution to reduce the crime measure.
In the urban district, the crime rate has a significant growth because of overpopulation. The number of people who live in the city is approximately high; therefore, it is tough to control the huge number of people, because, big societies always have difficulties of controlling or preventing the crime commitment. Besides, it would get worst when the rate of rural-urban migration increase dramatically. Although people are forced to obey the laws in big societies, still most of the peasants have willing to live in the overcrowded city.
On the other hand, we have a nearly low crime number in the country zones and that is because of satisfaction which villagers have in the life. That means, the main reason for the crime commitment is enthusiastic of wanting more, such as more money, more calmness, more respects, more strength,…, but people who live in the villages found no reason to commit a crime hence they are rightly satisfied. For example, the farmer, although, have fewer facilities than businessmen in the big cities, seem to be peaceful and calm and have whatever they want in their life.
Finally, about the solution to devaluation the crime level, in my view, the government should enhance the welfare of the people of the rural country in order to reduce the rate of rural-urban migration, so, that leads to control the urban areas better. Moreover, authorities better to gain the security of the city by training a mass number of police officers in order to maintain the crime commitment in the cities.
In conclusion, in most countries, more crime take place in the urban part of a society in comparison with the rural zone and in this essay we debate the causes and the solution of reduction of the crime as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...olution to reduce the crime measure. In the urban district, the crime rate has ...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...e calmness, more respects, more strength,…, but people who live in the villages fo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.115 0.155533422707 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.035 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.025 0.0437548338989 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1475 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.015 0.0403226058552 37% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.77262820149 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0275 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.1425 0.0861772015684 165% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0075 0.021408717616 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125 0.011925033212 105% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2088.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 357.0 316.048096192 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8487394958 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3081232493 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226890756303 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170868347339 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114845938375 0.137316102897 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77262820149 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484593837535 0.56093040696 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.5706182118 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 27.4615384615 20.7743622355 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7536745429 49.517814964 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.615384615 127.492653851 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7743622355 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 0.814263465372 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.1506140918 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.47142857143 1.69124875643 146% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384233030764 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157478029101 0.102741220458 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0777876642959 0.0668466124924 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.727582876157 0.534860350844 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157645183378 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219126909173 0.134430193775 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578844061871 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.520867654583 0.324371583561 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0598159020541 0.0638462369009 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292573121205 0.228012699653 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227187835202 0.058150111329 39% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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