Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.Why do you think that is?What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
The crime commitment in municipals is more that rustic regions. In my point of view, the cause of the crime growth in the civic district is overpopulation and the reason for the decline of crime level in the rural zone are the satisfaction of life. In this essay, the reasons and the solution to reduce the crime measure would be discussed.
In the urban district, the crime rate has a significant growth because of overpopulation. The number of people who live in the city is approximately high; therefore, it is tough to control a large number of people, since, great societies always have difficulties of controlling or preventing the crime commitment. Besides, it would obtain worse result when the rates of rural-urban migration increase dramatically. Although people are forced to obey the laws in major societies, still a large number of the peasants has willing to live in the overcrowded city.
On the other hand, we have a nearly low crime number in the country zones and that is because of the satisfaction which villagers have in the life. That means, the main reason for the crime commitment is enthusiastic from wanting more stuff, such as more money, more calmness, more respects, more strength,…, but people who live in the villages found the lack of motivation to commit a crime hence they are rightly satisfied. For example, the farmer, although, have fewer facilities than businessmen in the big cities, seem to be peaceful and calm and have whatever they want in their life.
Finally, about the solution to devaluation the crime level, in my view, the government should enhance the welfare of the people of the rural country in order to reduce the level and cost of rural-urban migration, so, that leads to control the urban areas better. Moreover, authorities better to gain the security of the city by training a mass number of police officers in order to maintain the crime commitment in the cities.
In conclusion, in most countries, most offenses committed in the urban part of a country in comparison with the rural zone and in this essay we debate the causes and the solution of reduction of the crime.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275862068966 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.115763546798 0.155533422707 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911330049261 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0270935960591 0.0501214627716 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0221674876847 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147783251232 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0197044334975 0.0403226058552 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.78875790536 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0270935960591 0.0326793684256 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.145320197044 0.0861772015684 169% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00738916256158 0.021408717616 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012315270936 0.011925033212 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2141.0 1933.35771543 111% => OK
No of words: 363.0 316.048096192 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89807162534 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322314049587 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228650137741 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173553719008 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121212121212 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78875790536 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490358126722 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.6464779667 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 27.9230769231 20.7743622355 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7145758803 49.517814964 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.692307692 127.492653851 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 20.7743622355 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 0.814263465372 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 50.7880906972 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.68656716418 1.69124875643 159% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3738907944 0.332605444948 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150456539818 0.102741220458 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749127452681 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.727614581571 0.534860350844 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159084611391 0.148594505496 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212496083658 0.134430193775 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633077823786 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.534150981867 0.324371583561 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.04521335659 0.0638462369009 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283738479525 0.228012699653 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293804890842 0.058150111329 51% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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