Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce crime rate? Any advice or feedback would be appreciated.
It is generally believed that there are more cases of crime in cities as compared to the rural areas. There can be various factors that give rise to the criminal activities. In this essay, we will discuss the reasons behind the increasing crime rate and possible solutions to control this.
Primarily, urban areas are more populous in comparison to small towns or villages. Massive working opportunities and convenient lifestyle lead to the great deal of people move to the bigger cities. The chances of crime automatically increase where the population is high. For example, in India, the number of crime incidents reported in metro cities are extremely large as compared to the villages. Moreover, an easy accessibility to media and technology makes cities more vulnerable to crime. For instance, the case of cyber fraud and cyber bullying are rising at an exponential rate due to the overuse and mishandling of internet. Therefore, it can be said that the burgeoning population in urban areas has made a noticeable rise in crime.
Although there is a significant increase of crime rate in metropolitan area, there are also a number of solutions to control this. Firstly, strict punishment should be enforced on criminals, that will deter them to perpetrate any crime. Also, there should be more police officers patrolling the different areas. Increase in the police force on roads and streets will definitely put a restraint on crime.
To recapitulate, if there are numerous reasons that result in the higher crime rate in urban areas, there are also many ways that can ultimately maintain the security in big cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12781954887 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78704066725 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3686838296 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294324211525 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971438429118 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569585463736 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1895700728 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014508625484 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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