Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
The crime commitments in cities are rather than in rustic regions. In my point of view, one of the main causes of the crime growth is overpopulation and the reason for the decline of crime level are the satisfaction of life. Therefore, overpopulation exists in the urban zones and life satisfaction was found in the country sides. In this essay, the reasons of the differentiation on the crime rate in two different regions and the solution for reducing the crime measure are discussed.
In the urban district, the crime level has a significant growth because of overpopulation. The number of people who live in the city is approximately large; therefore, it is tough to control a large number of people, since, major societies essentially need a massive number of police officers or powerful rules for controlling numerous people with variety type of characteristics and beliefs. Besides, it would obtain worse result when the rates of rural-urban migration increase dramatically. Although people are forced to obey the difficult or complicated laws in major societies, still plenty of peasants have willing to live in the overcrowded cities.
On the other hand, nearly low crime level in the villages is approved, since, people who live in the villages found a lack of motivation to commit a crime hence they are rightly satisfied. That means, the main reason for the crime commitment is greed or cupidity, For example, the farmer, although, have fewer facilities than businessmen in the capital cities, seem to be peaceful and calm due to the fact that the farmer senses no need for having rather savings or need for further education or successful business.
Finally, the solution to devaluation the crime level, in my view, the government should enhance the welfare of the people of the rural country in order to reduce the level and cost of rural-urban migration, so, that leads to control the urban areas preferable. Moreover, authorities better to gain the security of the city by training a mass number of police officers in order to maintain the crime commitment in the cities.
In conclusion, in many countries, the majority of offences committed in the urban part of a country in comparison with the rural zone and in this essay the causes and the solution of reduction of the crime debated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...arge; therefore, it is tough to control a large number of people, since, major societies essentia...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292452830189 0.247107183377 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.117924528302 0.155533422707 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0849056603774 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0283018867925 0.0501214627716 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0117924528302 0.0437548338989 27% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.158018867925 0.122226691241 129% => OK
Participles: 0.0306603773585 0.0403226058552 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89304046977 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0259433962264 0.0326793684256 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.139150943396 0.0861772015684 161% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00471698113208 0.021408717616 22% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00707547169811 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2315.0 1933.35771543 120% => OK
No of words: 384.0 316.048096192 122% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02864583333 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361979166667 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255208333333 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192708333333 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127604166667 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89304046977 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4921875 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.8706697688 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 29.5384615385 20.7743622355 142% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.9044324266 49.517814964 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.076923077 127.492653851 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5384615385 20.7743622355 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 55.0592948718 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 3.0447761194 1.69124875643 180% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345423229542 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165138260937 0.102741220458 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0829833539283 0.0668466124924 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.717598252226 0.534860350844 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174320097935 0.148594505496 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195667802498 0.134430193775 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626483594696 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.521116728057 0.324371583561 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0659392054589 0.0638462369009 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257691389349 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345420735208 0.058150111329 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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