The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be.
What are the reasons for this trend?
Is it positive or negative?
The expansion in business and tourism industry at global scale has made the world a global village where many nation are more identical in cultures compared to the past. In my opinion, I believe it is certainly a very positive shift but only to a certain extent as it has detrimental impact on cultural values and particularity which have made them unique in the first place.
The trend of cultural transfer becomes more aggressive after the industrialization when people started to migrate to different places all over the world. Furthermore, Globalization, which has enabled people to interact with people from different cultural background for business purposes, acted as a prime catalyst to fuel the inter-culture interaction. Consequently, people started to explore various community all over the world, which has encourage to adopt different tradition from this societies. Thus, without any realization, different nations became similar in cultures.
The cultural migration has surely strengthen the unity throughout the globe.
When people have same mentality, the chances of discrimination, which is major issue in many countries, reduce to a great extent. Moreover, multinational companies, which has business spread all over the globe will be benefitted because of similar culture throughout the world. For instance, Major companies invest around 50 million a year to improve quality of communication so that people from different background can communicate effectively. However, it is a direct threat to the individuality and originality, which is a beauty of the diverse culture. In addition, it can also affects the tourism industry, which is only source of income for many nation, such as Nepal, because cultural diversity is a major attraction for many people. Thus, identical culture is nothing but a double-edged sword.
In conclusion, although cultural similarity motivates the world-wide unity, it is dangerous for individuality. Thus, people should be encouraged for multi-culture co-existence to make the world better place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun nation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many nations'.
Suggestion: many nations
...s made the world a global village where many nation are more identical in cultures compared...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e made them unique in the first place. The trend of cultural transfer becomes m...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...community all over the world, which has encourage to adopt different tradition from this ...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adopting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: adopting
...all over the world, which has encourage to adopt different tradition from this societies...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...urage to adopt different tradition from this societies. Thus, without any realizatio...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'strengthened'.
Suggestion: strengthened
...s. The cultural migration has surely strengthen the unity throughout the globe. When ...
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Line 6, column 583, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...verse culture. In addition, it can also affects the tourism industry, which is only sou...
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Line 6, column 648, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun nation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many nations'.
Suggestion: many nations
...try, which is only source of income for many nation, such as Nepal, because cultural divers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in the first place, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61093247588 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16248036168 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575562700965 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.336390872 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4666666667 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244444143166 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822227738252 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502668966588 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131399742768 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517371817212 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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