The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be.
What are the reasons for this trend?
Is it positive or negative?
it is deemed that customs and traditions of various nations of globe becomes identical as compared to previous time. The plausible reasons of this maneuver are globalisation and availability of cheaper transportation. I personally opine that this is a negative development which I will elucidate in following paragraphs.
The primary reason that cultures are becoming similar is that world has turned into a global village. that is to say that, as globalisation facilitates people that they can procure anything from anywhere despite their geographical boundaries which was not possible in past. As a result, distinguish characteristics of different cultures are alleviated because people follow others ethics. For example, in the past, Christmas was only celebrated in Western countries, whereas nowadays, it has been celebrated by people from all around the planet though they are from different region. The secondary reason is that air transportation are affordable and owing to this, people travel a lot to various continents. Therefore, they learn from non-native culture and try to implement those things in their customs. Thus, these could be the reasons that the cultures are become similar.
this is a negative occurring because there are many nations which are highly depended on their culture to generate revenue by alluring tourist. If the cultures are same then they have to face an egregious situation because nobody will travel there to explore their ethics. To exemplify, people come to india to see its cultural heritage and customs, however, when there will be no difference between the Indian culture and others then tourist will not fly to visit india. In addition to that, world will turn into a boring place in the absence of multiple culture as it is one of the reasons for amusement because people go only at those places which they have not seen before or they do not know about. Hence, by considering above mentioned factors, it is a negative evolution.
To recapitulate, due to globalisation and less expensive air-fare, cultures from all around the earth are becoming identical. Detrimental financial impact on the economy and lack of thrill are the reasons to think it as a negative happening. Furthermore, it is recommended that people should not blindly follow any culture instead they should first think about it and then they should embrace it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in addition, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26439790576 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86656386628 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53664921466 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4414265943 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.722222222 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285304761321 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929251724097 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614216805337 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166348058102 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393473819018 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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