Dear Mohan Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to request you for one week leave from work from 17th Jun to 24th Jun to finish my exams of microbiology course.
I will cover these days with my weekly off days in the coming months of July and August. Plus will work for the organization with the microbiology team to support in sample testing after finishing my tasks daily. In addition to that, I will be glad to share my learning with other mates of microbiology department to make them aware of new standards and protocol.
After examination, I will be counted as a certified microbiologist and will be able to perform pathogen testing in the lab as per the Food and Drug Administration norms and also this step will help our lab to get a certification of competent lab testing facility.
I hope you will understand my desire for learning microbiology and allow me to take leaves to finish my course work.
Thank you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal Bhat
Dear Mohan Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to request you for one week leave from work from 17th Jun to 24th Jun to finish my exams of microbiology course.
I will cover these days with my weekly off days in the coming months of July and August. Plus will work for the organization with the microbiology team to support in sample testing after finishing my tasks daily. In addition to that, I will be glad to share my learning with other mates of microbiology department to make them aware of new standards and protocol.
After examination, I will be counted as a certified microbiologist and will be able to perform pathogen testing in the lab as per the Food and Drug Administration norms and also this step will help our lab to get a certification of competent lab testing facility.
I hope you will understand my desire for learning microbiology and allow me to take leaves to finish my course work.
Thank you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal Bhat
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Dear Mohan Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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...you in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Vishal Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74418604651 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84501404594 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1422206478 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.597708511475 0.244688304435 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236764171041 0.084324248473 281% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.252490752769 0.0667982634062 378% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28404042009 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.252683467346 0.056905535591 444% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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