Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
No one can ever rule out the significance of protecting the nature. Unfortunately in recent years felling the trees destroyed a big portion of natural forests, which can leads to intense outcomes. Individual and social impacts would be prominent considerations to be put into account in this case.
Regarding the individual impacts, it can not be denied that producing the paper is one of the most important usage of the wood, so learning to use paper properly and separating it from other trashes would save many trees. If each person plant just one tree every year after ten years the result can be spectacular. Another important matter is not to put on fire in the forest especially near the trees. Researches show that the majority of big fire incidents in jungles are caused by people on vacation.
With respect to social impacts, without a shadow of a doubt, some rules and policies should be applied related to preserving the environment. It is prominent to control logging by imposing laws. Government can prevent constructing roads and highways through the jungles. Many trees would be cut down to build a highway. Besides, the pollution of the cars can damage the trees near the road.
To make a long story short, I personally believe that proper education about how to preserve the natural world can exert very good influences. Moreover, each society can has some policies to protect the environment. I also think considering some penalties for the people who damage nature deliberately is vital.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, regarding, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04365079365 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75940351528 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8387156151 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174556635067 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521000216477 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289613116234 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100089113474 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00866930707218 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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