Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many
parts of the world, with serious results for the environment.
What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Over thousands of forests have been demolished by the human. Although there are undoubtedly problems associated with savagely cutting trees, it can be seen that the blame rests mainly with the government because of the commercial aspect of this issue. In this essay, I am going to represent the drawbacks of the matter and also introduce a breakthrough for this problem.
Considering deforestation and city construction will dramatically reduce the green-power source of producing oxygen which may directly affect global climate change. Global warming is one of the biggest problems which is truisticly unescapable which is mainly because of the over-consuming natural resources especially trees. This has been traced by satellite photography over the years, as Bill Gates said ((if this trend continues, the next catastrophe after the pandemic would be climate change disaster)); therefore, it is absolutely vital to take radical action towards deforestation.
The breakthroughs can be done on a wide scale. The first and most important action would be implementing strict laws and imposing restricting measures by the government. For example, cutting trees in European countries is forbidden and criminals are sentenced to jail. Communities movement and ONG's are the other ways to save Jungels. In this case, people can be employed as a volunteer to preserve natural resources, woods and green areas of their inhabitation. For example, in our country, forests had been remained by the locals who live in that place over the years. They also plant new trees to spread the woods which is highly valued.
To sum up, deforestation has already made a great impact on our lives that cannot be ignored anymore. Therefore we have to take radical action to handle the consequences. These key solutions are absolutely necessary and can be applied on a wide scale from individuals to authorities.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, therefore, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3110367893 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99480353666 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6364716751 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18584309172 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557393150356 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491129974281 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111989895992 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052492305409 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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