With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction.
Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?
The continuing destruction of forest and increasing of urbanization is a catastrophe for the global biosphere. Also, due to poaching, many animals are becoming endangered. However, I believe it is crucial to preserve animals as we are dependent on them. There is a range of measures that could be implemented to solve this issue.
To begin with, everything in nature is inter-linked. Perhaps, removal of one animal will agitate the balance of nature and can even change the ecosystem completely. As a result, it may lead other animals to suffer. For an instance, a mouse may seem small and insignificant, but snake depends on them and hawk depends on the snake in the food chain. So, extinction of mouse may lead to the threatening of life to further animals. Thus, it can notice how conservation of animals is of paramount importance in order to maintain the organic phenomenon.
However, there are a number of ways to curb the issue of endangered animals. Firstly, the government should introduce more awareness campaigns targeting the preservation of animals. More programs should encourage which must give emphasis on the local nature reserve, afforestation and volunteering programs to save wildlife habitats. Lastly, the government has to prohibit products which are made from endangered animals such as rhino horns. Moreover, vendors selling such products must heavily penalize as this will make fear of hunting animals.
To conclude, each and every animal contributes a significant role in the food chain that's why they must preserve. Only when the government will make strict rules against illegal hunting and create various awareness campaigns, will this situation be remedied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, thus, as to, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31598513011 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94955117438 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6109724356 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1176470588 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181703916259 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552572323461 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448629021207 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103681814294 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454020115414 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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