In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
The advantage of medicine has allowed people to live longer and healthier; nevertheless, this positive trend can lead to detrimental impact on how to deal with the public health system and the economy to maintain ageing population, in particular for those developed countries. Therefore, some measures should be implemented to address this social issue that concern as a whole.
developed countries have faced serious issues to maintain elderly people because their needs are expensive and impossible to run in long-term. it is undeniable, that their fragile physical health and other chronic diseases require more attention from the health care system to improve their quality of life. Thus, it will create a significant impact on the health system and economic due to these countries have also other needs to attend.
Besides this, some actions are required to manage life expectancy to ease economic and social pressures for governments. Firstly, retirement age should be increased to 70 years in order to allow people to continue contributing to the economy, and enable governments to continue subsiding the public health system. Furthermore, aging population should incentivise to have private insurance to cover part of their medical expenses and this should be only achieved with governments; intervention to create insurances appropriate for this age group.
To sum up, life expectancy has increased in developed countries and this creates some stress on its economy; however, some actions are needed such as increasing retirement age and incentivising the purchase of private insurance to the elderly to minimize the impact on their countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, in particular, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50196078431 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87349579526 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1508638549 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.888888889 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4444444444 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242867612159 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103046294668 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621461182518 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157320988505 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643686515647 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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