With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?
Technology has become quite handy with humans these days. Some individuals believe that upgradation in the internet system is allows the person to make new groups and remain accompanied all the time. In my opinion, I completely agree that, as way of communication has completely changed with the invention of mobile technology.
Mobile technology helps the person to remain actively present anywhere in the world as well as at any time. Mobile applications with the support of internet is enough to have chat or discussion with friends and relatives without going out. In other words, face to face communication is not necessary to discuss things with other persons. There are ample of applications which allows the person to contact another one at every time such as WhatsApp with the help of internet.
The boundary line of making friends has become wider and open to all with the help of internet. These days, youngsters do not look for the face to face communication, they are excited and happy with online dating also, therefore, their options to make new friends are expanding with new mobile applications. For instance, Facebook page allow people to communicate with any one around the world and although it depends on the persons interest whether they want to proceed further to communicate or not. Therefore, it opens all the gate to the people for making new friends.
In conclusion, with the help of mobile technology the world will be smaller and smaller in nearby future. People will never sense the loneliness with the help of such instruments in our daily life and can communicate with anyone.
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Suggestion: anyone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0447761194 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70708376621 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533582089552 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5277764035 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21697257739 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780904279329 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592365923412 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134080991733 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705417586216 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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