As Countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes
Why does this happen?
How does it affect society?
It is irrefutable that the modern world is getting smaller and smaller by the day through globalization. It is argued by some individuals that the growth of a country is promoting the smaller family trend. This essay will discuss the reason behind such fashion and its impacts on society in the following paragraphs.
Family were bigger in size during past generation. However, we can see nuclear family these days. It is because of the cost of living in developed nations. The cost of education, medical expenses and basic need is increased to ten times when compares to 20 years back. This makes people to really think whether they need more kids? nowadays, we see working parents in most of the case, therefore they tend to have small family. On several occasion we can see people miss fun due to lesser members in their family.
Population control is the one benefit indirectly on a social level for the government. Having small families means only one or two kids of parents which decreases the total population of the nation. Another point to be considered is a smaller family means less utilization of natural resources and can benefit everyone by consuming little quantity of these precious and limited resources. In the same way, less toxic will be produced as the consumption is low.
In conclusion, inflation in the urban market convinced parents to have few kids so that their budget can be maintained, from the social point of view, it has various advantageous mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: bigger
...he following paragraphs. Family were bigger in size during past generation. However, we can...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ally think whether they need more kids? nowadays, we see working parents in most of the ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'several occasions'.
Suggestion: several occasions
...fore they tend to have small family. On several occasion we can see people miss fun due to lesse...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
... level for the government. Having small families means only one or two kids of parents w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, really, so, therefore, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96031746032 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64253537295 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6414508821 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155793013644 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495820235957 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469510169614 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868746942047 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05944928938 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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