Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
When it comes to the issue that the extended family today is less important than it was in the past, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinion. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the extended family’s members are more important today that it was in the past. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the life now is very hard. So, the parents work many hours during a day. If the children stay with their relative whom the parents trust them well during parent’s working hour, then the parent will feel more comfort. Eventually, this will decrease the parents stress and make them able to concentrate well in their job.
Another point why I advocate that the extended family’s members are very important today is the tough life nowadays. The life today is very expensive so, everyone may face a money problem. If the family members used to help each other, each family individual will feel more relax because he is sure that his family never let him alone facing his problem. Additionally, the moral effect that the family present to any one of them whom face illness or economical problem has a very good impact to that person.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the family members grow up together. So, they share many memories and this build a big trust between them. Also, the best way to enjoy the week end is by spending it with people whom we trust love and respect them and all of these things found between the relatives. Eventually, the family members’ relation with each other is the strong relation that last forever because it depends on their empathy.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that. But my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, then, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81793478261 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4663121922 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546195652174 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0132254309 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159425397617 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512410727131 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071829220593 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814470506532 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945995099096 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.