Of course in the real world, the people who earning enormous money succeed in their life. But this wouldn't happen for all the people. In my personal experience, I have come across diverse people. In that, I have learned why money makes people popular as well as respect in the society. So in this essay, I partially agree that few people earn money because of their hard work as well as how they evolved and learned the things from past experience. But not all people, some people luckily gain the money by lottery or fortune without putting any effort.
To begin with why people intended to running behind money. Could you admit money would solve all your problems?. Money is just a paper that people could use for their necessity of life and culminate their economy level higher in other's points of view. In other words, just compare someone with real life, Sylvester Stallone is the best example to exemplify how money makes people successful. Now everybody contemplates why did he become popular nationwide. But nobody knows how the initial stage he had struggled a lot in the film industry.
Furthermore, in his tragedy life, he had sold his dog for $50 to one family. That's how he had survived his Philidelphia life. Moreover, while he got a chance to direct as well as act in a movie named Rocky Balboa which is written by himself. After some years, he had earned abundant money then he returned back his dog which he sold for family. Thereby, without money, no one could survive and pursue their life in this world.
To recapitulate, success doesn't mean having full of money and wealth, it means how you are making others understand you better and giving respect without earning anything from you. However, some people like HCL owner Narayanamoorthy and Bill gates who is the inventor of Microsoft are spending their part of the money for charity and some social activities. So in my point of view, this would make people successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, of course, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76627218935 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40346150769 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573964497041 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8094187953 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.55 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234230616429 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722820193213 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605855474176 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151127140772 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665122345748 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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