Doctors from many of the countries are concerned that people are not getting physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions to overcome this trend.
At present, doctors say that many people are not doing physical exercise regularly, which is becoming an important cause for various illnesses. Most importantly work life pattern and lethargic attitude to do the exercise are reasons for this trend. In the following, passage, I will explain the causes in detail as well as solutions to overcome this trend.
People working in closed environment tend to be seated for long hours, which creates a lethargic attitude and prevents them from doing physical exercise. Additionally, youngsters spend most of the time engaged with social media or playing games reduces the inclination to do physical exercise, instead they spend most of their time in surfing internet or mobile phones. Moreover, it has been believed that obesity among many people preventing them from doing regular exercise. Therefore, working style and lazy attitude among many youngsters are preventing them from doing physical exercise regularly.
Organisations should create avenue for their staffs to do their exercise, facilities such as Zumba and yoga sessions could instigate interest among employees to a great extent. Furthermore, people should be fostered on the importance of doing physical exercise, which will prevent them from dangerous disease such as diabetes and obesity, by convening various camps at public squares. Similarly, companies should have break out time for their staff to do the physical exercise, as well as games could be organised on giving more emphasis to physical exercise.
In conclusion, physical exercise and balanced diet play an important role to lead a healthy life. It has been believed that diseases such as cardiac arrest and obesity could affect people who do not exercise regularly. Also,city development authority needs to develop many parks as part of their design, so that people get opportunity and space to do the physical exercise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40659340659 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66336893062 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553113553114 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9389657741 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239686649337 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104178752159 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691067051254 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149014289025 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795087979022 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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