Doctors should be resoponsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.
Do you agree with this?
It is often believed that to improve the physical wellbeing of the patients, doctors should instruct them. I completely disagree with the statement because doctors’ time is very important and there are many other ways to achieve that.
Firstly, many doctors have a very busy schedule. That is to say that medical practitioners such as surgeons, dentists, and cardiologists, who have spent their 10 years for learning, have to spend their time doing surgeries and curing diseases of their patients. Not only they have a scarcity of time but also it does not seem very efficient setting, in which an extremely trained person has to give the education, to educate people. To illustrate, countries like India and Brazil have 1 doctor on 100000 people, giving any kind of extra responsibility further occupied them. Therefore, it is safe to say that piling extra duty on doctors' waistline can further absorb their precious time.
Further, there are other media forms that can be a more viable solution. Nevertheless to mention that to educate the people government can step in to take the lead and launch a media campaign to educate the public on health matter issues. Other than that, as a preventive measure, making health education a mandatory subject in the school could warn the people about the importance of good health early on in their age. For instance, this measure was taken in Japan in the 1960s, as a result, the population of Japan has the most life expectancy in the world. Thus, other ways to aware people of their health should be used instead.
To conclude, I still disagree with the scenario due to adding extra burden on doctors can further decline the medical facilities and a government campaign for awaring public might be most effective way to spread information about health education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00660066007 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62981430438 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1061375033 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309022644174 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978776216329 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059788774674 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164218416562 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406034922388 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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