EATING AT RESTAURANTS IN CONVENIENT FOR MANY PEOPLE; SOME PREFER EATING AT HOME BECAUSE IT IS MUCH CHEAPER.

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EATING AT RESTAURANTS IN CONVENIENT FOR MANY PEOPLE; SOME PREFER EATING AT HOME BECAUSE IT IS MUCH CHEAPER.

Restaurant is one of the best business that should be invested today. A lot of people now choose to eat outside specially those who do not know how to cook their own food. On the other hand, there are also those who prefer to eat at home just to save money. For me, it is better to eat at home especially when you're with your family. But, there are also advantages that we should still consider in eating in a restaurant.

There are reasons why some people choose to eat only at home; First, they want to save money for it has less expense if you are the one buying your groceries and cooked your own food. Second, there are also those people who has a cultural belief that all of their family members should eat at home together because they have their superstitious belief that something bad will happened if they are incomplete. Also, if you are going to compare the environment between your home and in a restaurant; surely, you really feel much more comfortable in your home since you already know those people surrounds you.

However, many people also are much more convenient in eating in a restaurant specially those students. Aside from it is less hassle, all you are going to do is to have an order and in less than an hour your foods are ready to serve. Those workers also who have been working for a long hours particularly nurses will sometimes prefer in going directly to the restaurant especially when they are very stress and hungry. But, the disadvantage about this is that it is very costly.

Overall, many people prefer to eat in a restaurant for it is hassle free even though it is a lot expensive. But then, some also will choose to eat at home together with their family.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...s better to eat at home especially when youre with your family. But, there are also a...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... has a cultural belief that all of their family members should eat at home togeth...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...stitious belief that something bad will happened if they are incomplete. Also, if you ar...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
...s also who have been working for a long hours particularly nurses will sometimes pref...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.151335311573 0.247107183377 61% => OK
Verbs: 0.181008902077 0.155533422707 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0771513353116 0.0946595960268 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.106824925816 0.0501214627716 213% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0830860534125 0.0437548338989 190% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112759643917 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0237388724036 0.0403226058552 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35176459345 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0415430267062 0.0326793684256 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.080118694362 0.0861772015684 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0178041543027 0.021408717616 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.026706231454 0.011925033212 224% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1702.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50809061489 6.12580529183 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.268608414239 0.374742101984 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.165048543689 0.28420135186 58% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.11003236246 0.203846283523 54% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0776699029126 0.137316102897 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35176459345 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478964401294 0.56093040696 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.4631037733 60.7387585426 78% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0714285714 20.7743622355 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5805504508 49.517814964 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7743622355 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 38.5762829404 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 0.776 1.69124875643 46% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282616166514 0.332605444948 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121771395581 0.102741220458 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749806278854 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524158576842 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124728922092 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122464218806 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728801315692 0.0742795772207 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.353652502659 0.324371583561 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0501908733881 0.0638462369009 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210758404785 0.228012699653 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478569125039 0.058150111329 82% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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