People have different views about how governments should measure their country's progress. While economic progress is also essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important.
There should be many other factors to consider the growth of the Country. Economic progress can only show if the industries and banks in the country are working together in a profitable manner but the country's growth depends on its people and if they are happy with their work life cycle. It is also called a happiness index. It includes income per capita, weekly working hours, inflation rate vs growth in salary, lifestyle and medical expenses. Environmental stability can also be considered in a country's growth. Some countries suffered so much environmentally that we can not consider their growth as a pure achievement. We as a country should preserve our nature and its resources so that our next generations would also enjoy this free energy source and feel proud about us as a country because the country is not only a geographical place but it gets known by its people.
Other important factors are Health care, Education and Road transport. Any country should be able to provide it's people the required amount of hospitals in all minor regions with all-important types of equipment and for minimum money. Free education is an important factor if a country's most population comes in the poor category. Everybody should get a basic education. It will also give the country required human resource specialised in specific skills. Without skilled workers country's growth can not be achieved. With free education, we will be able to teach students of all level of the economic class. With a good road transport system, communication and transportation can become easy. Each village and city should be connected with good quality road so that the economy in the smallest community can also grow and flourish.
- The advocates of international aid believe that counties have a moral obligation to help each other while the opponents consider it unnecessary because money is misspent by the government that receive it Discuss both views and give your opinion 75
- Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory To what extent do you agree 61
- Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business To what extent do you agree 56
- Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself Tell them what you like doing in your free time Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interest 87
- Some people think that it is a good idea to give children a small amount of money each week to spend on what they would like Other people think that this is wrong and that it is a waste of money Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a profitable manner" with adverb for "profitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nks in the country are working together in a profitable manner but the countrys growth depends on its ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1167192429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75173991597 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3542185039 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236088978238 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848843779306 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821130059347 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1761253528 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228696575016 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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