In today's rapidly changing globalized world, it is often a pressing topic of discussion that our lives was better when technology were simpler. From last couple of decades because of modernization and industrialization of the world, technology has become one of the important part of our lives. Further in this essay will discuss whether these invention of new technologies has made our life simpler or not.
Firstly, it is fair to say that technology has made our life simpler in many ways. We can connect through internet to our friends or relatives at any time, whether they are in any part of the world. For instance, if I am sitting in Singapore and my parents are in US, I can talk or see them any time through whatsapp video calling, Facebook messenger, zoom, facetime. However before the invention of internet it was very hard to get connected. People used to spend a lot of money on phone calls. In addition to above, invention of mobile phones has made our work very handy. While sitting in car, park, malls etc. you can connect to your office/ colleague. Moreover, students can attend online classes from home, numerous of employees can do work from home.
On the other hand, detrimental of effects are there if you use these technologies for unlimited time. At very young age due to using of mobile and laptops juveniles and toddlers are facing many health issues. For instance, it is effecting speech of small kids, myriad of young people are suffering from backbone issues as they stopped moving. Therefore I firmly believe that advancement and invention of new technology have made our life better and simpler, however it is every individuals responsibility to use it in a limited way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87972508591 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70763774924 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 290.88556701 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5844748705 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186358150793 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580184080693 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687221365607 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132257960155 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532234639851 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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