Educating young people is naturally important. However, some think governments ought to invest more on education for adults in need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether government should spend money in education for adults as essential as young people. This essay will shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. First of all, education has the power to turn everything. The authorities should enhance the facilities and avail education to every child because they are the back bone of nations. Secondly, officials should arrange scholarships as well as loan to youngsters to accomplish territory education. Consequently, the literature people would be less, which is a bliss for every country. For example, Kerala state has less number of IL literature people due to the availability of education to all. As a consequence, in this competitive world everybody should have education to survive in order to meet the needs of daily life.
Moving towards the second argument of this debate, the first point is should Government spend money for the adult’s education due to lack of money or education facilities which mode the life is miserable to sustain in modern life. Apart from that, government should aware of crimes caused by unemployment. Hence, officials should provide arranging classes some sort of education to help making money in a possible way. Moreover, it is not possible to go and sit in a school. So officials must make sure and convenience them to attend regular classes. As a result, Government can proliferate the national economy in investing education for adults.
In conclusion, I conclude that, it is not a wastage of money for Government in investing money for adults as well as young people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...rgument of this debate, the first point is should Government spend money for the a...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
... classes some sort of education to help making money in a possible way. Moreover, it i...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a possible way" with adverb for "possible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... sort of education to help making money in a possible way. Moreover, it is not possible to go and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09271523179 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83466917413 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2391302472 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4705882353 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239044850548 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745309615524 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689922773956 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150235778527 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333735412588 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...rgument of this debate, the first point is should Government spend money for the a...
^^
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
... classes some sort of education to help making money in a possible way. Moreover, it i...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a possible way" with adverb for "possible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... sort of education to help making money in a possible way. Moreover, it is not possible to go and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09271523179 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83466917413 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2391302472 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4705882353 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239044850548 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745309615524 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689922773956 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150235778527 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333735412588 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.