Employers should focus on personal qualities over qualification and experience when choosing a job. To what extent you agree or disagree?

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Employers should focus on personal qualities over qualification and experience when choosing a job. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is challenge for recruiters, whether to focus on interpersonal skill over education or work experience when hiring a candidate. In my opinion, It is required to have mix of both to survive in this competitive world.

To begin with, as industries are growing at rapid pace, it is likely to have employees who are honest to themselves as well as the employers. furthermore, employees with good ethics and self-discipline can learn new skills and gain experience thus performing their jobs well. For example, many companies select employees on the basis of her personal qualities as these companies believes that job related skills are teachable.

On the other hand, we cannot forgo the other factors such as qualification and work experience,Today most of the engineering jobs requires job-seeker to have related qualification, which helps them to apply this knowledge when they do the duties. For instance, An CNC operator must know basics of various parameters that effects its working.

In Conclusion, both interpersonal skill and education with experience is needed to achieve success. Personal skills have its own worth but most occupation need hands on and good university education. Therefore, employers should focus on qualification as well as interpersonal skill.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'mixed', 'mixt'.
Suggestion: mixed; mixt
.... In my opinion, It is required to have mix of both to survive in this competitive ...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...to themselves as well as the employers. furthermore, employees with good ethics and self-di...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Today
...uch as qualification and work experience,Today most of the engineering jobs requires j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44776119403 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18089081619 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651741293532 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3232123238 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.9 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182253781226 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700636281641 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684418762403 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103434615697 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228195026683 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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