Employers should give their workers at least one month holiday a year as it makes them to do better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In our modern workplace, it is expected that organisations allocate month long vacation to their employees on an yearly basis. I largely agree with this statement as the benefits of privileged leaves are multifaceted positively influencing both the employers and employees.
Some people argue that the provision of extended holidays is detrimental to the profitability of companies. Each worker availing holidays directly translates to loss of revenue for the organisation due to the reduction of productive hours. This issue is further intensified as projects and delivery deadlines are compromised when workers go on leaves. Consequently, in critical projects the team is impelled to devise contingency plans or work additional hours to deal with the burden of missing employees who are on vacation. For instance, in IT companies, when technical staff in time-sensitive projects take long leaves other employees are expected the share the work in order to meet the deadlines.
On the other hand, I believe that the advantages of providing holidays are legion and can benefit both parties. Firstly, staff today suffer from hectic work and constant stress that can cause havoc on their health along with loss of motivation. Holidays give workers time to relax and recuperate from stress dealt at high pressure work environments. Rejuvenating their minds and bodies abets them to focus better at work and improve their efficacy and productivity. Secondly, these perks provided by companies showcase to their employees that their hard work and dedication is recognised and appreciated. Lastly, leaves provided by organisation is an opportunity for employees to spend quality time with their family members along with maintaining a balance between work and life.
In conclusion, although long leaves might come with financial implications for organisation, we would be remiss not to consider the merits of holidays ranging from motivating the employees to assisting in striking a balance between work and home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nth long vacation to their employees on an yearly basis. I largely agree with this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51290322581 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01778460686 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6509885498 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169127586538 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626880118015 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608110923368 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910904754877 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676310556946 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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