In today's world environmental problems have been a topic of global concern. While a school of thought advocates that lack of punishment from governments to the outlaws is a main culprit, I disapprove of their belief.
To begin with, there are different reasons making environmental issues an international problem, one of which is developed countries releasing waste to impoverished nations. For instance, it is reported that the southeast Asia countries might be regarded as others' landfill due to the waste from Europe. The repercussion of this phenomenon is environment-related issues will not only remain unsolved but will also deteriorate. In other words, it will still be an alarming situation on a global scale.
In addition, each individual plays an essential role in saving the planet, instead of national governments. Whether there has been adequately strict punishment or not, human's tendency to harm the environment would still exist due to their low level of tolerance. For instance, some people find moving to the allowed spots to litter disturbing and they will keep littering on the street regardless of any warning signs. In some worse case, they would use another method to circumvent the law. Hence, the situation will degenerate if people lack of awareness.
To conclude, governments should not be blamed for becoming global problem. Therefore, with a view to saving the planet, each individual are recommended to take actions instantaneously.
- Students leave high school without learning how to manage their money What are the reasons and solutions for this issue 84
- Students leave high school without learning how to manage their money What are the reasons and solutions for this issue 84
- Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment Some others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40434782609 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12665532718 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647826086957 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8190719751 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6153846154 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142424319828 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477309122796 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055420306542 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875974520824 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473168334135 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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