Environmental problems are becoming a global issue. Environmental problems are counter-challenging the quality of life people enjoy in modern advanced societies. Do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or it should be addressed by individual countries?
It is true that whole world is facing the various environmental related issues. Due to this unhealthy surrounding, masses are not able to enjoy high standard of living. Effective policies and their proper implementation will help to tackle the situation. I completely believe the all the nations has to work together and help one another to overcome from this universal problem.
In this era of this updated technology individuals can avail quality life, but playing with the nature has costs us by giving enormous problems. To begin with, different types of pollution like air, water and soil is increasing immensely, due to which many health related problems are increasing. If world will not have clean air to breath, water to drink and soil to get fresh vegetables, how can we think of worthy life. There is no key without a lock and same is with this also. Moreover, when we join hand then it become more easy to overcome difficult issues. All the countries has to form a joint group of the expert environmentalist to get the solution for this global problem.
In addition, authorities of all the developed nations has to look into the matter. Nations which has more resources has to help the countries where the situation is worth. Advancement in technology has to be checked, whether it is environment friendly or not. Vehicles which exhaust more fumes must be banned and modern cars which are good for nature must be promoted. For example, Japan has introduced electronic vehicles which are now gaining the ground in whole world. Hence, if experts for the whole world will look for the ways to come out of this world problem than situation can be improved favorably.
In conclusion, unequivocally environment of the whole world is degrading and this is further leading to lack of availability of clean resources and ultimately down grading the living standards. This universal problem can the handled if the countries try to help each other and came with innovative ways to manage and protect the global environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...l is increasing immensely, due to which many health related problems are increasing. If wor...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ey without a lock and same is with this also. Moreover, when we join hand then it be...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...so. Moreover, when we join hand then it become more easy to overcome difficult issues....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in technology has to be checked, whether it is environment friendly or not. Vehic...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ore fumes must be banned and modern cars which are good for nature must be promot...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...each other and came with innovative ways to manage and protect the global environ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ect the global environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01764705882 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75630136811 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5298374586 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7777777778 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149802517714 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043506312661 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427393895922 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945546899569 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277501978934 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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