Essay Nowadays, internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative developments ? has been updated
there is no doubt, that Television and internet have become the most prominent ways to get popularity. Many people believe that there are various benefits for individuals and society while some other have totally opposite perspective. this essay will discuss the both sides of argument in detail.
Firstly, a majority of people have viewpoint that it's a great change, if a person from economically deprived section gets chance to shine. that would help him to grow financially and socially. For instance, a reality show has recently declared it's winner from UK and they have given him a huge sum of money as prize. it clearly shows that the media influences such as Tv and internet can drive prosperity in the lives of people. In addition to this, it is a human tendency that he always want to contribute back to his region if he is successful and same applies for the above scenario.
Beside the advantages, there are few concerns which must be taken into consideration. In the current trend, people do multiple things to become well known. For example, a handful of police men uploaded their videos on social media sites while on duty and they had to face termination. In the same manner , a woman uploaded a clip of an intelligence officer while he was performing his obligations and the lady who did this act was not aware that the officer's identity is confidential and her action could create a serious life threat to that officer.
In conclusion, there is nothing wrong if we use these ways of communication sensibly. In my view , if we use these mediums effectively, they can open new doors for us to achieve our dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79787234043 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70173695296 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652482269504 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9109366383 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15555847123 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482005066062 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506988616824 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870386567215 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074033878889 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.