Essay topics: In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The revolutionary modern technology, leading a fast paced lifestyle, compelled human population to have a hectic life, in which individuals are in rush on their daily life, having no adequate time for cooking. Therefore, they tend to use junk foods as their prominent edible. Since junk foods are rich source of harmful fat, excessive using of them cause a common obesity in people of all ages, especially in youngster. To eliminate this harmful phenomena, it would be a good practice to rise the tax for short-term however, government should have some other bylaws to fully abolish the issue.
Imposing higher tax on fast food will definitely reduce its usage by poor people, however it may not work for affluent portion of the society. In addition to a rise in tax, encouraging people by some kind of reward would be a more practical solution. In this solution, individuals who order their meal from some selected restaurants which are serving healthy food will have a fractional refund for their bill. By doing this, people will have more tendency to replace fast food with a healthy edible.
Moreover, since most of the consumers are workers who choose fast food because of not having enough time and due to its convenient availability, rising taxes will not prevent them from using these kind of meals. There should be a healthy alternative which is as much easy-accessing as a fast food is. The alternative meal must have some features in order to be a suitable replace, including affordability and easy availability. It has to have high nutrition facts as well.
To sum up, I believe that in order to have a deduction in consumption of junk food, not only should government increase the tax, it should also introduce an appealing affordable healthy replacement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...higher tax on fast food will definitely reduces its usage by poor people, however it ma...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...of the consumers are workers who choose fast food because of not having enough time ...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... taxes will not prevent them from using these kind of meals. There should be a healthy alt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79745099477 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3985636011 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245355926359 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926567338911 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487383055039 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15176584178 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490461720321 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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