Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
It can be seen that globalization promotes worldwide economies positively the governments should be paid attention to its negative aspects. While it is argued that globalization causes detrimental results. I believe that it produces great breakthrough though authorities should take care of harmful outcomes of globalization.
To begin with, globalization is very important for every nation, now it can be seen that every country make business or communication without any kind of boundary now the world is a global village. Globalization develops local economies so, it helps nations to decline an unemployment rate and raise economic growth. Also introduced advanced technology. For example, when a multinational company established a factory in a developing country. The new equipment the new management skills and job vacancies are all in the best for the local society. As a result, people all over the world can communicate together easier than the past by such media as the internet or satellite.
On the other hand, nobody can deny the negative effects of globalization. One of the crucial sides is a cultural shock. worldwide networks and televisions have severely affected young people. These facilities have a great impact on youth so, people fill cultural difference and generation gaps. It is very harmful to any nation's culture of history. For an instance, because of satellite t.v young people watch popular superstars like singers and dancers etc. they try to follow them so it's created a problem between generation, because of it generation gap is high.
To sum up, although globalization has sparked a debate in recent decades whether it is a blessing or a curse. According to many economists, globalization is playing an interesting role in today's life: but all should not ignore the side effects of globalization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: Worldwide
... the crucial sides is a cultural shock. worldwide networks and televisions have severely ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, kind of, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38144329897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14165661058 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0708836682 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236055412326 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05763371745 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692399038841 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138055232547 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795637622062 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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